Chris was helping around the house very well. He was a brilliant child. He even started helping me in the garden and wants to learn more gardening skills. The money is coming in steadily and it won’t be much longer before we can take our trip.
Columbus is doing well in school and is meeting lots of friends. He has one friend that he is calling his girlfriend. I am trying to get him to slow down with that. Her name is Chandra Bigelow and she is a snob. She is always telling him she is the best friend he can have and that he has got to marry her one day. He likes the attention and likes to rub it in his single teenage brother’s face. I’m glad Chris is still single; he doesn’t need a girl yet. I just can’t stand seeing my babies growing up.
One Saturday I decide to take the boys on a family outing. We hit up the pool all day and finally by evening we are all starving and decide to fill up at the Bistro. We make it home in time for the boys to have their friends over and I invite over a new friend of my own.
Chris’ friend Candice has grown up into a young adult now, but they are still hitting it off well. I may have to have a talk with that girl if she starts messing with my son too much. She’s 20 years old and he is still only 17. She better watch out messing with a minor.
I had been opening up to Ian a lot lately. I tell him how sad I feel all the time. I miss Ramsi terribly and every time Chris or Columbus tries to visit or call him he has some reason not to speak with them. Its devastating for all of us and I have no one to talk to. Ian tells me that the man’s crazy for not seeing how special I am. It takes me off guard. I never knew that Ian would think that I’m special. I tell him not to get too attached, that I have a history of not sticking around.
Ian calls one night and asks me to meet him behind the theatre. When I arrive he pulls me in and kisses me. I kiss back for a minute, but then I realize it’s not right and I pull away. He asks what is wrong. I try to explain to him that I don’t need this type of relationship right now. I love Ian dearly as a friend, but he’s not someone I want to spend my life and time with all the time. He is just a best friend like Sunny. The real reason he wants me to meet him is not to make out behind a building, but he needs a place to stay for awhile. I tell him he can stay with us, but we will have to share a room. I tell him we are leaving for France the next morning and that if he has the money he can go with us. He offers to pay for the whole trip and we take 8,000 simoleons to France with us.
On arrival to France, I look intently at the board trying to find my name. I knew I had signed up for an adventure in the Felix Burial Grounds, but I had to find the man that set me up with the job. After finding it I headed off to the find the man and let him know I was ready to do his bidding. He tells me he lost a baseball in the burial grounds, but is too afraid to go back. I set off to find a lost baseball.
It takes a lot of searching and rock turning but I eventually found the entrance to the tomb and I walk down the stairs with butterflies in my tummy. These were butterflies of excitement not nervousness. Tombs never scare me. While I’m entering a tomb my boys visit an art museum. I made sure before I left that Ian or Chris keeps Columbus with them at all times. They love their “uncle” Ian.
I tore down walls, moved statues, and deactivate locks. While inspecting a lock I got bugs all over my hands, but I recovered. I also got soaked from a dive well, and I also recovered from that. The thing that caught me off guard was a random man being in the tomb sitting on a chair alone. I screamed and he jumped up and took my hands and told me I was ok. When I met his eyes I fell in love with them instantly. I completely forgot about my adventure and melted into him and our conversation. His name was Ayman Diab.
We talked for hours and finally exhausted over came me and I told him I needed to sleep, but invited him into my tent. He refuses the gracious offer and grabbed me kissing me hard before running from the tomb leaving me completely star struck and deeply in love… again with a foreigner.
After finding the baseball in a hole, I rushed back to claim my prize of 1,082 simoleons. I then start looking for my boys and Ian. It’s time to go home.
Work and school start back over as soon as they arrive home. Ian decides to become a writer and joins the journalism career path and starts learning to write. When I finally was alone with Chris I told him about Ayman. I promised him a long time ago that I wouldn’t hide things from him so I had to tell him of this mystery man in the tomb. He tells me that while I was gone adventuring that Ian had told him that he was in love with me. Chris said that if I met another man, Ian would be devastated. I felt horrible about this. Why had I let Ian move in with us? I didn’t want to break his heart.
Columbus has another friend now. His name is Sebastian. They spend a few hours watching TV before Sebastian’s mom makes them do their homework. Columbus begs us to buy a TV and we have to explain to him that TVs cost money and that we don’t have money for a TV because we are remodeling our home.
We started the remodeling process by adding walls for a second floor and then moved the bedrooms upstairs. They love their new bigger bedrooms. Columbus’ favorite color is Iliac and Chris’ is maroon.
The lower level is completely gutted and Ian and I’s room is moved upstairs. The lower level will consist of an extra bathroom, living area, study, kitchen, and dining room.
I’m really hoping he finds a place of his own soon. He’s becoming a pest because he’s in love with me so much and now it’s obvious. I’ve tried explaining that I am not dating anyone anytime soon even if I did fall in love. He has even started trying to sleep with me lately. Blah!!
Walking to my car one morning I hear someone call my name in a deep French accent. I turn my head and find Ayman standing by my mailbox. I rush to him and kiss him on the lips. He says he misses me. I missed him too, but last time I tried a relationship with a man from abroad it didn’t work. I was very weary of letting him get close to me, but at the same time I wanted him, mostly I needed him. I needed to feel loved and safe.
We made out all day and my desire for him increased to an insane level. He still wouldn’t come to bed with me and I was about to explode with desire. The making out made us lose track of time and before I knew it Ian was standing in the door way heartbroken and betrayed. I was so ashamed at the choices I had made.
I lashed out at Ian. I had told him not to love me; I had told him I didn’t love him. He had no right to feel this way. I made him leave. I was mad, hurt, and just confused. I didn’t know what I was going to do. Life was just hard right now.
I baked cookies and sat down the kids and introduced them to Ayman. I told them what happened between Ian and I and why he had to leave. Columbus was beginning to understand things now that he was 12.
Later that night I invited Ayman to stay the night with me and I did something with him that I hadn’t done with a man in 10 years. It was an amazing night. He made everything very special. My only mistake was not being on birth control. I really didn’t need another child at this point in my life. I was 42 years old. It was way past time for child bearing. I just prayed this wonderful night wouldn’t end in a pregnancy.
Soon after Columbus’ birthday he finds Chandra Bigelow. They have been best friends since grade school and now they are in love. He asks her to be his girlfriend and she happily agrees.
Late one night while snuggling with Ayman something moves in my tummy. Ayman’s hand was on my tummy and he felt it too. I am pregnant again. I’m hoping for a girl this time. Only time will tell.
It’s time to tell the boys about their new sibling. I wonder how they will take it. Will the brothers be happy, or ashamed of their mom’s choices. How will my life be affected. Will Ayman ask me to marry him?
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17 responses to “Adventure Breaking Hearts”
dustydreamer
January 26th, 2010 at 19:09
Really nice update! Your main character deserves some happiness and hopefully Ayman will pop the question!
Poor Ian though…ah wells..the heart wants what the heart wants. ^^
Aww..I cant wait to see the baby! She has some pretty cute kids so far!
adventure11031
January 26th, 2010 at 20:39
Ayman just has a horrible awful nose. I let my sims do as they please and she wants him so, we’ll see how the kids turn out soon. I work the rest of the week, so it maybe the weekend before another chapter is out. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Tessa
January 26th, 2010 at 21:26
Awww, poor Ian
It’s a shame she led him on for so long too.
dlegrow
January 26th, 2010 at 23:54
Thank you for another great update, Nurse. I never read Bryce’s legacy (sorry!) because when I found out about it I was SO far behind I didn’t feel like catching up or starting from the middle. Either way, I’m glad you started this story, it’s been a great read so far!
The one thing I would suggest (don’t take it personally): watch your verb tenses. I noticed that for most of the chapter, you write in present tense, which is great because not a lot of people can pull it off, but then you will suddenly switch back into past tense. It’s easy enough to understand what you are trying to say, but the chapter will be a lot smoother if you pay attention to that.
Hopefully that helps you out a bit, and hopefully Ayman sticks around! I agree with you about his nose, but it’s not really THAT bad, and the rest of him seems nice, so I’m sure a cute child/cute children will be soon to follow.
dlegrow
January 26th, 2010 at 23:57
PS–I like the pictures! They fit nicely on the page now instead of ‘falling out’ if that makes sense and, even better, I can see them all right off the bat! Yay!
(sorry for forgetting to put that in. I apparently like using post-script lol)
adventure11031
January 27th, 2010 at 06:19
Thanks so much for the feedback. I take it all in and use it to become a better writer. I have always liked to write but never got into it, but I feel like I’m 100% better than I used to be and I wont ever learn unless I take constructive criticism. Thanks again.
dlegrow
January 28th, 2010 at 01:17
That’s awesome! I’m in the same boat as you and try to do some free-writing when I can, but it’s hard with school.
Either way, I’m a crazy OCD proof-reader so you can usually count on me to catch those mistakes…whether I say something or not is a different story lol. I’m glad you took it as a good thing!
Also, I like what you have done with the layout and the links to the chapters on the right hand side. Being able to click once instead of twice is always an added bonus.
I also find it helpful to provide links at the end of a chapter to the previous and the next chapters, respectively. (I’m not sure if you did that already, so if you did, just ignore me!) If you need help with HTML to do this, we’re (Google and I, of course
) here to help!
adventure11031
January 28th, 2010 at 06:18
Dlegrow if you have yahoo (kgriffith1987) or gmail (nurse11031) will you send me an IM sometime? I may need you to help me with a few things if your interested? Thanks in advance.
dlegrow
January 28th, 2010 at 16:14
No problem, Nurse. I tried adding you to my Gmail. I’ve never done it before, but it seems to have worked…I think you may just have to accept my request? :S
Anyway, my email there is meyvelegacy@gmail.com and the display name should read “Casana Meyve” or “dlegrow” (I haven’t decided if I’m changing it or not) just so that you know it’s me. Otherwise, you can always send me an email if the chat isn’t working.
I think I might like the addition of dialogue in the story as well. It can be tricky sometimes, but it can really help establish relationships between characters. Good luck!
adventure11031
January 27th, 2010 at 12:41
Has anyone else had problems with romantic interactions after downloading WA on a MAC?!
clairezy018
January 27th, 2010 at 15:56
Oh wow what a chapter! about to explode with desire hmmm? haha I wish I could write stuff like that in my legacy. ‘Strawberry stared at the delishously formed brain she was about to explode with desire’ lol ^_^ can’t wait to read your up date!
adventure11031
January 27th, 2010 at 19:32
nessva
January 28th, 2010 at 10:13
I hope the next little one gets Asa’s beautiful hair color…and nose. lol. It doesn’t seem like she has much luck with love, hopefully the third time is the charm. (I know she didn’t love Ian, but he counts as number two anyway
)
adventure11031
January 28th, 2010 at 10:48
I think the love problem is just my computer hating Asa. Chris may have found love.. oops saying too much..
Now that I have my writing style down, I may start adding more Dialogue! May need some more advice on how to make it sound good though. Thanks again for all the comments and support.
dlegrow
January 28th, 2010 at 16:17
Or maybe there will be a new number 3 in the future…
(I’m a s**t-disturber, what can I say lol)
tws1996
January 29th, 2010 at 12:02
I love your new adventure legacy Nurse!! I’ve become absorbed in it!! Great Chapter, TWS1996 or TW1996!!
adventure11031
January 29th, 2010 at 12:24
Thank you so much! Another chapter will be up today or tomorrow.